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man: more grammar improvements

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- place commas
- expand contractions (this is written prose :)
- add some missing words
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Jan Engelhardt
2013-07-03 08:19:20 -04:00
committed by Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek
parent 337fa161c4
commit 409dee2e44
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@@ -83,15 +83,15 @@
underlying block device, or a specification of a block
device via <literal>UUID=</literal> followed by the
UUID. If the block device contains a LUKS signature,
it is opened as a LUKS encrypted partition; otherwise
it is opened as a LUKS encrypted partition; otherwise,
it is assumed to be a raw dm-crypt partition.</para>
<para>The third field specifies the encryption
password. If the field is not present or the password
is set to none, the password has to be manually
entered during system boot. Otherwise the field is
entered during system boot. Otherwise, the field is
interpreted as a path to a file containing the
encryption password. For swap encryption
encryption password. For swap encryption,
<filename>/dev/urandom</filename> or the hardware
device <filename>/dev/hw_random</filename> can be used
as the password file; using
@@ -239,7 +239,7 @@
<listitem><para>The system will not
wait for the device to show up and be
unlocked at boot, and not fail the
boot if it doesn't show
boot if it does not show
up.</para></listitem>
</varlistentry>
@@ -282,7 +282,7 @@
</variablelist>
<para>At early boot and when the system manager
configuration is reloaded this file is translated into
configuration is reloaded, this file is translated into
native systemd units
by <citerefentry><refentrytitle>systemd-cryptsetup-generator</refentrytitle><manvolnum>8</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para>
</refsect1>