man: more grammar improvements

- place commas
- expand contractions (this is written prose :)
- add some missing words
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Jan Engelhardt
2013-07-03 08:19:20 -04:00
committed by Zbigniew Jędrzejewski-Szmek
parent 337fa161c4
commit 409dee2e44
18 changed files with 217 additions and 210 deletions
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@@ -73,7 +73,7 @@ along with systemd; If not, see <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
executables with a local file if needed; a symbolic link in <filename>/etc/kernel/install.d/</filename>
with the same name as an executable in <filename>/usr/lib/kernel/install.d/</filename>,
pointing to /dev/null, disables the executable entirely. Executables must have the
extension .install; other extensions are ignored.</para>
extension <literal>.install</literal>; other extensions are ignored.</para>
</refsect1>
@@ -112,7 +112,7 @@ add <replaceable>KERNEL-VERSION</replaceable> <filename>/boot/<replaceable>MACHI
<varlistentry>
<term><command>remove <replaceable>KERNEL-VERSION</replaceable></command></term>
<listitem>
<para>calls every executable <filename>/usr/lib/kernel/install.d/*.install</filename>
<para>Calls every executable <filename>/usr/lib/kernel/install.d/*.install</filename>
and <filename>/etc/kernel/install.d/*.install</filename> with the arguments
<programlisting>
remove <replaceable>KERNEL-VERSION</replaceable> <filename>/boot/<replaceable>MACHINE-ID</replaceable>/<replaceable>KERNEL-VERSION</replaceable>/</filename>
@@ -145,7 +145,7 @@ remove <replaceable>KERNEL-VERSION</replaceable> <filename>/boot/<replaceable>MA
<filename>/etc/kernel/install.d/*.install</filename>
</term>
<listitem>
<para>Drop-in files, which are executed by kernel-install.</para>
<para>Drop-in files which are executed by kernel-install.</para>
</listitem>
</varlistentry>
<varlistentry>