doc: correct orthography, word forms and missing/extraneous words
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<listitem><para>The root user's password</para></listitem>
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</itemizedlist>
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<para>Each of the fields may either be queried interactively from
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the users, set non-interactively on the tool's command line, or be
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<para>Each of the fields may either be queried interactively by
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users, set non-interactively on the tool's command line, or be
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copied from a host system that is used to set up the system
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image.</para>
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<citerefentry project='die-net'><refentrytitle>shadow</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>
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file. This setting exists in two forms:
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<option>--root-password=</option> accepts the password to set
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directly on the command line,
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directly on the command line, and
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<option>--root-password-file=</option> reads it from a file.
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Note that it is not recommended specifying passwords on the
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Note that it is not recommended to specify passwords on the
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command line, as other users might be able to see them simply
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by invoking
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<citerefentry project='die-net'><refentrytitle>ps</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para></listitem>
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