doc: correct orthography, word forms and missing/extraneous words

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Jan Engelhardt
2015-11-06 13:45:21 +01:00
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<listitem><para>The root user's password</para></listitem>
</itemizedlist>
<para>Each of the fields may either be queried interactively from
the users, set non-interactively on the tool's command line, or be
<para>Each of the fields may either be queried interactively by
users, set non-interactively on the tool's command line, or be
copied from a host system that is used to set up the system
image.</para>
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<citerefentry project='die-net'><refentrytitle>shadow</refentrytitle><manvolnum>5</manvolnum></citerefentry>
file. This setting exists in two forms:
<option>--root-password=</option> accepts the password to set
directly on the command line,
directly on the command line, and
<option>--root-password-file=</option> reads it from a file.
Note that it is not recommended specifying passwords on the
Note that it is not recommended to specify passwords on the
command line, as other users might be able to see them simply
by invoking
<citerefentry project='die-net'><refentrytitle>ps</refentrytitle><manvolnum>1</manvolnum></citerefentry>.</para></listitem>