docs: fix typos and improve language

Fix typos and improve the language by
adding a few commas and a missing word.
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Erik Sjölund
2022-01-26 22:35:33 +00:00
committed by Luca Boccassi
parent b6d2f0338e
commit f223fd6add
13 changed files with 21 additions and 21 deletions
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@@ -241,7 +241,7 @@ about existence or non-existence of a record can be returned nor any user
record at all. (The `service` field is defined in order to allow implementation
of daemons that provide multiple distinct user/group services over the same
`AF_UNIX` socket: in order to correctly determine which service a client wants
to talk to the client needs to provide the name in each request.)
to talk to, the client needs to provide the name in each request.)
The `GetGroupRecord` method call works analogously but for groups.
@@ -257,7 +257,7 @@ with `more` set, so that multiple replies can be returned (since typically
there are multiple members per group and also multiple groups a user is
member of). As with `GetUserRecord` and `GetGroupRecord` the `service`
parameter needs to contain the name of the service being talked to, in order to
allow implementation of multiple service within the same IPC socket. In case no
allow implementation of multiple services within the same IPC socket. In case no
matching membership is known `NoRecordFound` is returned. The other two errors
are also generated in the same cases as for `GetUserRecord` and
`GetGroupRecord`.
@@ -270,7 +270,7 @@ before the complete list is acquired.
Note that only the `GetMemberships` call is authoritative about memberships of
users in groups. i.e. it should not be considered sufficient to check the
`memberOf` field of user records and the `members` field of group records to
acquire the full list of memberships. The full list can only bet determined by
acquire the full list of memberships. The full list can only be determined by
`GetMemberships`, and as mentioned requires merging of these lists of all local
services. Result of this is that it can be one service that defines a user A,
and another service that defines a group B, and a third service that declares